Well I just happen to be a so so designer ... your page is not to bad, but could use some work. Like everything, it is not ever going to be perfect. The best thing you can do is to keep on trying to improve upon it and to expand on your skills. Some of my earlier work was very crappy but after a couple of years of practice and hard work I have improved a little bit.
Anyways it is good for a start. Keep up the good work.