[ChaosBlade]

Well, Here's my second attempt at poetry. Decided to share this one aswell as i got alot of positive feedback on my first.

Comments, as always, are welcome.

:: http://www.deviantart.com/view/14390822/ ::

 

[Cid Highwind]

It's nice, but it needs some good music to give the song some emotions and make it feel 'alive'

 

[Blade556]

Love the song, man. I can't really picture how it would be sung out, since theres 6 lines in every verse, but it sure looks awesome. Love the way you set up the sentences with different and abstract words that have the same meaning as a different word...Anyway, enough confusing you

Keep up the good work

 

[ChaosBlade]

>> Anyway, enough confusing you

Hehe, Dont worry, I think sometimes i can do that pretty good myself ^^

Thanks for the comments everyone.

 

[Popuri]

can't you publish a singing version? ^^'
i would like more to listen it. ._.

 

[ChaosBlade]

No such thing exists

I just wrote the lyrics, thats all. Im not a musician and i really cant sing anyway, so.. too bad i guess