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New Song - Nobody - please listen ( or at least read)

heres a new song! thought u guys might be interested. its not meant to be very advanced lyrically, but thats because the songs a little more emotional and personal. but here u go! its the first song

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/crittazmusic.htm

I remember the first time I told you I loved you//
You said it back and my heart jumped, I wanted to hug you//
But, that was the past love//
Wanna get past love//
But keep thinking back when I was giving back rubs//
You gave me shivers down my spine with a simple touch//
And I was giving you all my love with a hint of lust//
No other girl even existed in my eyes view//
The thought of you leaving keep thinking what would I do//
I saw your hand slipping from mine//
Thinking baby please let's just try to fix it this time//
I know we had some bad times but the goods were better//
You wasn't trying to hear me so I had to write you letters//
I wasn't, trying to let go but I did what I had do to//
Hurt so bad but I couldn't get mad at you//
You seemed fine but i was dying//
I kept pushing and and telling myself i gotta keep trying//
But with these thoughts that keep coming in like replay//
I'm just hoping one day i'll be able to say//

Now I know we over but baby I still tried to go and talk to you//
Would do anything drive a thousand plus blocks for you//
Thinking that maybe we was wrong with our choices//
Something told me let go but i ignored the voices//
Still drove to see you in the middle of the night//
Still felt that maybe this was just a middle of a fight//
But I was wrong and you played me along//
Said you wanted to see me and you made me keep holding on//
But u moved on and i didn't wanna see it//
All those things you did i didn't wanna believe it//
I gave you so many chances but now you finally lost me//
Baby I'm gone but you long since forgot me//
Now if you ever wanna ask me, I'm doing cool//
And if I'm ever hurting badly I ain't telling u//
You jus an empty face gone in my past//
No regrets but like I said it's all in the past//
 

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The Hunter
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Touching... really touching....

Did you write it yourself? I really like the lyrics, because they fit my own story :(
 

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Sorry, but, I'm not touched at all. And the repetative beat in the background, which most hip-hop and rap has, along with no real singing, just "rhyming" if you can call it that, sounds horrible in my eyes. Sorry, but I don't like this type of music, and, it doesn't touch me at all.
 

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thx for checking it out :) yeh i wrote it myself. for the ppl that didnt like it :( i guess i can understand. jus not ur type of music
 

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I didn't even listen to it, I just read the lyrics, because normally I can't stand such music (metalhead / gabber here ) :heh:. But I like the lyrics because I recognize a lot of my own situation in it :thumb:
 

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Posty said:
Sorry, but, I'm not touched at all. And the repetative beat in the background, which most hip-hop and rap has, along with no real singing, just "rhyming" if you can call it that, sounds horrible in my eyes. Sorry, but I don't like this type of music, and, it doesn't touch me at all.
Most music is repetative, believe it or not. Try thinking of it with your own beat or sound. If you think that this is no real singing, emotions don't have to sing to get their point across.
 

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Your lyrics are pretty impressive.....it definitely carries the message on. God forbid I post any lyrics i've written (done in dark, depressive times)...you'd either go mad, or jump off a building. ;)

r2rX :D
 

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^^ hehe if u do write u shud post them! i wud be happy to read other ppls work.
 
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