[Guyver2K6]

hi i took this tutorial on how to draw anime, and this is what i got.
done freehand, plz tell me anything i should improve thnx

 

[Coolsvilleman]

well first off im not expert but is that a guy or girl? mouth also looks odd to me.

 

[Player-X]

If you want to go for that anime look the face shoud be rounder with as little noticeble inward curves as possible or no inward curves at all and less details like the mouth shoud be a line and the iris shoudn't spill over the eyes, the lines under the eyes shoud go and the nose shoud be less pronounced

 

[SnakeBite]

I agree with Player-X, but overall it's a nice drawing. Keep up the good work :thumb:

 

[Guyver2K6]

thnx guys, ill take more time

but hey its good for my first try lol :lol:

 

[Kraelis]

Incorrect shadows. But darn good for a 1st try.